It is necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course to bring their children up. Do you agree or disagree?
parenting has become very challenging these days and to overcome such challenges many couples who are expecting babies have started attending parenting classes. some people believe that these classes are not beneficial and it would not help individuals to become better parents. However, from my point of view, these courses play a crucial role in child's up bringing.
Firstly, no one is born as a perfect parent. Each parent learns through his or her own experiences step by step. parents, being human, often falter and need time to understand their ward because each child is different and unique. Secondly, the vast majority of parents are not ready to become the best parents and do not comprehend how to do simple and daily actions. For example, some people find it difficult to change the diaper. Besides, these training courses also teach parents how to use various tools and technologies as an aid, for better up bringing of a child and how to act to children in different situations.
On the other hand, being a parent is a natural and wonderful experience which does not give any training. As soon as a couple enters the phase of parenting, the ability to raise their child is naturally born in them. it is the confidence that is required and rest is attained gradually. parenting needs are not same for all and thus a predefined course is insufficient for many couples.
In conclusion, parenting courses are not absolutely necessary for all parents and benefit a select few. Therefore I partially agree with the opinion of compulsory parenting courses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10646387833 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67640098041 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623574144487 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0737403322 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411304108226 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114419602709 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904848223169 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23423574148 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841763842578 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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