It is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places for a high proportion of young people Agree or disagree

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It is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. Agree or disagree?

Submitted by kevann on Sun, 06/19/2022 - 00:32

Sentiments diverge on whether to provide the amount of University for the young crowd community. Although some formidably censure this stance, I advocate it due to some rational reasons.
Admittedly, University size can be divided into institutes. This can be explained by the fact that cooperation between enterprises and the government or Government can open the online university , which in turn removes barriers of place useful or not needing too much fees to build. Take Udemy as an exemplary model for online courses when people can get the certificate of French University while they are online in Vietnam. Parallel with the French enterprises and the Vietnam Government organized the institutes to help people get the French certificate. Hence, it is possible for providing university places for young people.
Further and even more prominently, it is unnecessary to build university places for young people If it is unuseful ; however, the opposite is true for a country developing the technology by a large amount of clever contribution. Perceptibly, citizens can upgrade their value. This leads to countries developing the technology by contributing significantly. As a result, online university is the chance for a country to get a large amount of clerisy.
By way of conclusion, I believe it is possible for everyone to have a university degree. There are contribution clerisy is the element of the technology development for a country.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...mittedly, University size can be divided into institutes. This can be explained b...
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Line 2, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...rprises and the government or Government can open the online university , which ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...es and the government or Government can open the online university , which in tu...
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Suggestion: ,
...ernment can open the online university , which in turn removes barriers of plac...
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Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...en the online university , which in turn removes barriers of place useful or not...
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...urn removes barriers of place useful or not needing too much fees to build. Take...
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Line 2, column 268, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ers of place useful or not needing too much fees to build. Take Udemy as an exempla...
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...ple. Further and even more prominently, it is unnecessary to build university p...
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...rominently, it is unnecessary to build university places for young people If it...
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...r a country developing the technology by a large amount of clever contribution. ...
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Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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..., citizens can upgrade their value. This leads to countries developing the techno...
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Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'clerisies'?
Suggestion: clerisies
...iversity degree. There are contribution clerisy is the element of the technology develo...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, while, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33624454148 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1353947637 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572052401747 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.8796254853 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357425135559 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136294837133 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131216859245 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210924025462 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431889213162 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mittedly, University size can be divided into institutes. This can be explained b...
^^
Line 2, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rprises and the government or Government can open the online university , which ...
^^
Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es and the government or Government can open the online university , which in tu...
^^
Line 2, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ernment can open the online university , which in turn removes barriers of plac...
^^
Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en the online university , which in turn removes barriers of place useful or not...
^^
Line 2, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urn removes barriers of place useful or not needing too much fees to build. Take...
^^
Line 2, column 268, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ers of place useful or not needing too much fees to build. Take Udemy as an exempla...
^^^^
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple. Further and even more prominently, it is unnecessary to build university p...
^^^
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rominently, it is unnecessary to build university places for young people If it...
^^
Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r a country developing the technology by a large amount of clever contribution. ...
^^
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., citizens can upgrade their value. This leads to countries developing the techno...
^^
Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'clerisies'?
Suggestion: clerisies
...iversity degree. There are contribution clerisy is the element of the technology develo...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, while, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33624454148 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1353947637 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572052401747 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.8796254853 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357425135559 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136294837133 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131216859245 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210924025462 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431889213162 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.