It is no longer mandatory for individuals to travel in different countries to get familiar with other cultural varieties, instead, we can know about such cultures from books, movies and the Internet. Although the world is now globally connected, in my opinion, travelling is an irreplaceable experience.
Firstly, travelling enhances people with hands-on experience of any cultural aspect of foreign countries. When people travel can come across with everything learned while surfing on the internet or read in the books. Moreover, by roaming around different places, makes us real citizens of the world. More specifically, we can taste new cuisines, despite reading recipes on our tablets, visit famous museums and monuments, and eventually speak with foreign inhabitants. To illustrate this, I could never understand the whole structure of the Louvre museum if I have never been in Paris, even if I have watched the Da Vinci Code a couple of times.
Secondly, travelling abroad gives people opportunities that would have been otherwise impossible if they had only stayed in one place. Although globalization made everything possible and knowing about any area in the world doesn't take much time, money or energy, the chances to work in developed countries, or operate a branch in another place are only feasible because of travelling. For instance, Forest Gump became one of the world's most successful businessmen because he wandered through many countries where he found so many chances.
In conclusion, I believe that it is very important to roam around different places, because of the experiential view of travelling, and the opportunities individuals can face.
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or e 89
- The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities Derby and Nottingham Between 2000 and 2009 78
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 73
- Parents of obese children should be punished for making their children fat Do you agree or disagree 61
- The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon from egg to adult fish Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40076335878 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9395880103 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667938931298 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2407234324 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.636363636 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212746712729 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726371197985 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754889532579 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11423250767 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688987398855 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.