It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about culture and people,
because people can learn from books, films or the Internet. Do you agree or
disagree?
There are various ways to gain cultural knowledge that people can take into account, such as reading available documents and travel. It is sometimes said that the former one is so good that the later one is not essential. Personally, I do not agree with this idea.
Firstly, sometimes the information used is incorrect or limited. Nowadays, there are numerous information sources for readers to choose: magazines, newspapers, websites and so on. The authenticity, however, of those is still questioned since some of them are made up for marketing purposes or out of date. For example, my friends read some travelling advice from a blogger and took a short trip to Ly Son last year. Unfortunately, because the entry was written 2 years ago, most of the data for the accommodation, vehicles and prices were not right. In addition, there are certain places that we cannot find much information about owing to their unpopularity. If someone wants to travel Amazon jungle, there might be not sufficient information for them.
Secondly, experiences usually bring travellers more unforgettable memories. Learning via books and other media can deliver a huge amount of knowledge, but it is not able to make it easy to remember compared to travel. Real incidents provide many emotions and an insight look into the culture and humans which we cannot find in books. That is the reason why undergraduates in the travelling faculty often have real experiences in other provinces instead of read materials all the time. I had frequently had a lot of reading about Dalat and the meanings of its landmarks’ names, yet I had never succeeded in remembering them. Nevertheless, after my trip to those places, I could bear them in my mind without any attempt.
In conclusion, despite available documents’ pros, they cannot replace travel. In my opinion, Travel is perhaps the only way bringing the whole look into a strange culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10094637224 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94801324211 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646687697161 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5384730573 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.8333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175092967656 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449475535236 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434873827522 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922283150383 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384983256978 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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