some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. they say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. to what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of wasste?
Polluted environment has been such a burning issue for decades that recycling household waste is taken into account. However, citizens seem not to pay attention. To deal with this problem, it is believed that policymakers had better launch a law to make people recycle. Personally, I suppose that laws play an important role in this situation.
Firstly, all dwellers are forced to participate in reprocessing when a law is introduced, which leads to an increase in recycling. In the past, people had hesitation in it since they thought it was time-consuming, and they would not lose anything in the short term. Nevertheless, if they had been punished or fined, they would have done better than ever. Moreover, governments have tried various ways, from advertising on television to education in schools, but they did not bring any long-lasting results. For those reasons, it is high time for policymakers to put more pressure on citizens and make them act.
Secondly, the amount of money governments gain from law-breakers can be used to invest in renovating recycling facilities. Because equipment such as garbage bins and garbage trucks is exposed to toxins, chemicals and dirt everyday, so they need maintaining and replacing all the time, which requires a huge sum of money. Fining people who do not recycle not only encourages them to join environmental protection but also supports government budget for environment. In the long run, this system is likely to have good results. As soon as people see them, they are willing to recycle more without any obligation.
in conclusion, government should legalize recycling to take farther steps in saving the Earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...s exposed to toxins, chemicals and dirt everyday, so they need maintaining and replacing...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...recycle more without any obligation. in conclusion, government should legalize ...
^^
Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...take farther steps in saving the Earth.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, i suppose, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1962962963 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95570639177 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651851851852 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5880595698 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297249028695 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836513660599 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563739060691 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161272649763 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372434450292 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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