It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people We can learn just as much from books films and the internet Do you agree or disagree (397132)
Increasing desire of traveling has certain advantages for every individuals and this is the tremendous way to learn and understand other culture. This essay will not support above notion and reasons behind this phenomena discuss in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, in this cutting-edge era people are living in the global village as the invention of the internet shrunk our planet. Thus, people can search anything on their finger tips with in second and enhance their knowledge. Moreover, some masses are eager to learn about the other culture and tradition always travel different place to know more. As a result, they obtain plenty of knowledge by exploring new places. To epitome, one can visit different places and get thorough information and learn in phenomenal ways.
In addition to this, public can search anything on google and get an information regarding any culture, however, it is not that much effective way of learning. People can acquire basic knowledge and information very Swiftly with the help of internet and books at any corner of the world. Furthermore, numerous films are also made on the different culture, tradition and language where we can learn by watch them on television. In exemplification, a movie name Madras made by renowned director supramaniam on their spiritual culture is the prime example of learn about other culture.
To close the discussion, I pendown saying that by exploring new places, we can learn about other culture in marvelous ways as we can see and feel more closely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...support above notion and reasons behind this phenomena discuss in the subsequent par...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, thus, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05985915493 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67947104229 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556338028169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6510969032 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.75 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.520952796369 0.244688304435 213% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158710760027 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.193383079305 0.0667982634062 290% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.347022865192 0.151304729494 229% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.311771012289 0.056905535591 548% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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