It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet. Do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, there are a variety of sources to find information on social media platforms with the strong development of technology and science. Just by owning a smart device, people can search about the culture of many countries in the world through books, films, videos or the internet instead of traveling to other places in the past.
Let’s start by looking at some apparent benefits of traveling overseas to find out their history and culture. First of all, people can experience firsthand the unique culture and identity of a new country. When people roam to a new place, they can realize and see cuisine, traditional costume and characteristic customs. For example, we can try eating with our hands in India, enjoying street food in Thailand or Korea, wearing kimonos and bathing in hot springs in Japan,... Each country will bring you interesting experiences that you can only imagine through books and newspapers.
On the other hand, due to high expenses for traveling to other places , some people believe that humans can read books, watch films or videos or search on the internet are more suitable. This way can help people save their valuable time as well as money because there are a multitude of movies, and books available in the world and they don’t need to pay for it. There are many types of books written about cultural lifestyle which share experiences, culture shock, and the fun facts about visiting a new region. You also join Facebook groups or watch Youtube videos to have a more visual perspective.
To sum up, it is great if people have an opportunity to visit other places to get more about their culture. There are still some benefits of exploring that via paper tools, posts and videos on media platforms to save more time and money.
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Suggestion: , .
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, still, well, as to, for example, as well as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85245901639 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46109459978 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8403841236 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.846153846 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271074031139 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891953061902 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772533163193 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15905494359 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511650923662 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.