In the current developing era, abundant of information can be found in books, films and internet. That is the reason why majority of people often argue that, individuals can gain the cultural knowledge of other nations, without the necessity of travelling. I partially agree to this notion, because of the benefits of travelling.
On the one hand, books and other technological advancements, made the travelling as an option to know the rich culture of many places. In fact, internet and books has a potential to give us an imaginary view of places from every corner of the world. Movie directors mainly immerse the audience into their films by mind-boggling visuals and give the viewers a specific and multi-dimensional perspective. Furthermore, watching movies, reading stories, browsing over the internet can have countless advantages, mainly a lot of time can be saved and more knowledge is gained in short period of time. For instance, movies like slum dog millionaire, deeply focuses on the rich culture and traditions in India, which can be understood by many parts of the world.
On the other hand, despite of the time saving facilities, there is a noticable importance of travelling to other countries rather than browsing or watching the films. However, the information or pictures in the internet may not be accurate and moreover, the visuals we see in a movie are mostly from the director's perspective. If an individual really thrives to gain the knowledge of a particular place, travelling there and experiencing by themselves is the most preferable option. Since experiencing and learning will be much more realistic.
In conclusion, eventhough there are multitude of choices to gain the knowledge about the rich culture of different parts of the world. Travelling would be ideal, to experience and showcase our thoughts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 582, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...d and more knowledge is gained in short period of time. For instance, movies like slum dog mil...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'directors'' or 'director's'?
Suggestion: directors'; director's
...s we see in a movie are mostly from the directors perspective. If an individual really th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23310810811 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04583435549 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.932915685 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.642857143 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289085866595 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866800701988 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045553832678 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157723093382 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568319311684 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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