It is not necessary to travel to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet . Do you agree or disagree ?
In the current developing era, any information can be found easily only through the internet, books and newspapers. It is for the reason why many people believe that in order to absorb the cultures of many regions and countries, it is not necessary to go to the places, they all can be gotten through the books, the internet or the movies. In this essay, I will express my disagreement with that point of view throughout some relevant examples and explanations.
To the first state of thoughts, the movies which reflect the social reality will often give the viewers a more special and multi-dimensional perspective than just going around to learn about the actual life. Furthermore, it also reduces the time people might spend on learning or approaching the hidden corners of many countries, which is excessively complicative to be understood. In fact, the internet and the books are similar in the way to be approached or understood, the images, the written contents in the form of stories or statistics could be an easy way to get fully understandings. Basically, watching movies, reading stories or searching over the internet, they all provide a large amount of knowledge in a short period of time and have many perspectives for those who refer to the mentioned issues.
To the other side of notion, it also carries a lot of risks when applying internet-approaching way to gain the knowledge or experience via networks or printed goods. People are often taught not to believe what they read in the internet, due to it cannot be verified with the accuracy about the information or the whole contents given. Moreover, with the aspects from the books, they are often written from the perspective and subjective feelings of the authors, if the writters are people those who are having life with a greatful vision, the information in the books will bring many values, even though if they write the books based on personal emotions or outstanding imagination; the story inside will sometimes get out-tracked of the truth somehow, the information from there will also become acceptable but not enough for the realism. In fact, being at the movies’ side, which are commonly a form of entertainment, the filmmakers who want to get high revenues should create an amazing script, otherwise it is made in a different way from the reality about cultures or specialties to attract more viewers from many ages. Therefore, in my strong perspective to this issue, people should go and acquire knowledge from their own thinkings due to the fact that culture is not a simple and single issue to gain the inside beauty, there are often specific reasons and meanings for people to attain it, orexperience it by themselves. Since experiencing and learning will be much more interesting and realistic than being only at the small screen with some noted and given information or cues.
In conclusion, I totally disagree with that point of view for all the benefits given and mentioned about going outside in the reality which is very necessary. When a person really wants to know more about people and culture in the other places, the best way is travelling and experiencing it by himself for all the good.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'contents'' or 'content's'?
Suggestion: contents'; content's
...racy about the information or the whole contents given. Moreover, with the aspects from ...
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Line 3, column 1020, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...an amazing script, otherwise it is made in a different way from the reality about cultures or spec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 10.4138276553 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 41.998997996 193% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2655.0 1615.20841683 164% => OK
No of words: 538.0 315.596192385 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93494423792 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84803312574 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479553903346 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 818.1 506.74238477 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.5805297888 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.0 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8666666667 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184919755866 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616764357278 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355467709675 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112005126532 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016883986918 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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