Visiting in isolated area is always a matter of interest of human being. Though it have some drawbacks, i think the benefits are far more.
On the one hand, there are several advantages related with traveling the remote areas. Firstly, there are numerous animals and plants yet to discover which might reach benefits of people. We can find more and more new species by researching jungle, and if find something beneficial, we can take the advantage of it. For instance, in 2002, a team of scientists went into the Amazon rain forest and there they found some tree that can destroy the Virus of Malaria, a dangerous disease, and by the help of this the earth was relieved from the death equal disease. As a result of this, we can be helped by some species. Furthermore, we will also be able to know about our earth more, and can figure out other types of unknown species which might help us to move forward.
On the other hand, the shortcomings should also be taken into account. One of this is that visitors can be attacked by some dangerous animal and may cause death. In the forest, there lived numerous deadly animals which are unknown to the human can attack them. Consequently, the scientists have to lost their lives in some cases. Moreover, it is too costly and there is a great chances of being waste of money. One group from London, for example, went to the South pole where they have to spent 23 billions of dollars. However, even though investing a huge amount of money the group unable to discover anything that can reach advantage of people. Therefore, the whole money went to vain and there was nothing in return except some experience.
In conclusion, people visit isolated area can bear loads of benefits for the human being, however, the chance of losing lives and money are also a matter of concern.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67391304348 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36727663958 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540372670807 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5766588717 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5294117647 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0588235294 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.090354805471 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300423655484 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384292131088 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0452606597312 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333613793709 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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