It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole.
What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Due to the changes in technology and development, it is feasible now to visit remote natural environment for scientist as well as for tourist. The harsh climate in the Antarctica in unbearable for a normal human being, but after all the research and development, now we are to able to overcome all the obstacles. In my opinion, the advantages of this development overweighs the disadvantage, as we will see in the above paragraphs.
On the one hand, the research and development in these areas can leads to various discoveries which may include fossils, ancestors, and weather control strategies. For instance, The fossils of species are usually found in freezing point areas, there might be a possibility that we may discover fossils of a new species, which had been living in these areas for many years. These areas are highly undiscovered, we may find something extraordinary in these locations which may help us in the future,
On the other hand, Initially, Location like these require a lot of labour and transportation. The tourism to such places is possible now and can be adventurous. However, the cost of living and pricing might be considered as a negative factor even for the scientist and researchers. One of the major disadvantage is that these areas are extremely unstable, natural calamities like avalanche, snow storm and etc are common there. Due to lack of medical services, it would be laborious task to handle these situations.
In conclusion, Research and development will help to improve the human race and it can unlock various mysteries of our universe While the lack of facilities can trigger the research and tourism, it can improved by getting more funding from the different countries.
In my opinion, it is great that we are now able to visit remote natural environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'improve'
Suggestion: improve
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, well, while, after all, as for, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0602006689 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98041916542 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528428093645 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2355634394 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.083333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218552322797 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865378065057 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772553215047 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123359294553 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828526787964 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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