Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Many believes that arts courses should be mandatory for children in schools. However, some believes that it serves no purpose in school and education. Art can be in any form like music, painting, dance and etc. In my opinion, art is a part of personality development and schools should always teach it as a subject. We will discuss from the both side either arts should be essential or not.
On the one hand, arts can be considered as a extra curricular activity and many children can get aware of their hidden talents they have. However, it should be essential for each one because one should be multitalented, should know variety of things. For instance, Albert einstein was a well reputed scientist but he also had a hidden talent which is music, many believes that he plays music instrument which helps him to get more connected to his scientific work. Arts can give children more confidence and will make children more talented and most importantly it can affect dramatically on the personality development.
On the other hand, some believe that arts can hinder the education of their children, they might get distracted from their studies and may not perform well in their exams. Student may waste their time in doing such activities which will ultimately affect their career.
The decision can also affect on the children who are interested in learning arts. However, there can be a separate days for art session where only interested students can go there.
In conclusion, Art as a subject in school can boost the personality of the children, give them more confidence, help them to find their hidden talents while education can be also affected for some children. From my perspective, Arts should be mandatory as a subject in schools for all children because ultimately it will help them in some way or may open their covert side of thae brain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...in any form like music, painting, dance and etc. In my opinion, art is a part of persona...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the one hand, arts can be considered as a extra curricular activity and many chil...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'day'?
Suggestion: day
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Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help them find' instead.
Suggestion: help them find
...he children, give them more confidence, help them to find their hidden talents while education ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 7.85571142285 331% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89873417722 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63214296235 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503164556962 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3702564529 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.2 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208846138461 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841621870397 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491401733923 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127619032992 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629510900623 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.