Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
Some nations are getting accelerated in terms of supermarket stores, they can adversely affect the growth of small businesses. Because of these issues, many say that the local people might get succumb due to business failure. Although I do not agree on the side that the local might get adversely affected due to crashes in their business, and if we consider it from the perspective of development, it might be one of the best ways to country's growth.
Local businesses are totally dependent on the nearby societies, their sale can be affected intensely if there are some better deals available within the area In comparison with supermarket stores, local stores have a much lower sale, turnover and less item varieties. For instance, there are two stores, which are opposed to one another, store A is supermarket while Store B is a Local store.I personally prefer visiting a local store for small items and daily needs. Although I do not get a variety of items, most of us do not care for the choice for basic requirements. However, in the case of a bulk purchase, most of us might choose store A. In general, the small business store and supermarket stores are made for different purposes and situations.
On the other hand, if by chance local businesses are about to get crash, then they can use several strategies to attract customers like sales, price drop, visual representation, ads, and others or in the worst case scenario, there are several government agencies which can provide zero percent interest loans to such people. Although these schemes are available in limited countries, many are adopting it and soon it will be worldwide. Moreover, people with small business can have collaboration with online websites to sell their product. The most typical example is the Amazon.com, many retailers sell their products there. They just have to list their item with pricing and it gets listed all over the world. These online businesses can also lead to development and growth in many nations.
In conclusion, Local businesses have many options to choose to grow or move their business to the next level. It is very unlikely that local communities face death due to business failure as they are backed up by the government in many countries. However, the development and growth in the supermarket can affect local business and communities. The local stores are preferred for daily needs and small items, while the supermarkets are for choices and heavy shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ermarket while Store B is a Local store.I personally prefer visiting a local stor...
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Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to store'
Suggestion: to store
... bulk purchase, most of us might choose store A. In general, the small business store...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2086.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05084745763 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69548408182 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496368038741 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4701656216 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.888888889 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9444444444 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340386576866 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119129210747 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880745519685 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230803704582 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997808543581 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.