Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
Equally proportionate students for every stream in the university. There can be several numbers of student in various classes, and of course, it can be a large number or short. I have to deny with the statement and i will be explaining the reason in the above passage.
Every country has its own circular, tradition, or culture, the citizen can treat genders differently. However, from the perspective of education and job, one might get skeptic because of the improper ratio of men and women. Let us consider an example, Although India is a very populated country, the number of male and female vary drastically, the males (are greater in number) are preferred for the outdoor work and females (lesser in number) are more oriented towards doing the household work. If the education is provided on the basis of the equal number gender, then most of the male might get jobless due to the tradition that males must do the outdoor work, females won't be allowed to do the actual earning. So, it can be a real problem because of the lack of equality among sex.
On the other hand, the requirement for the particular work can be an issue. It is widely considered that man can handle the work of a woman, but a woman cannot be able to cover up everything that man can do. For instance, machine repairing requires a lot of physical exertion and due to the fact that woman do not have as much energy as a man has, a female cannot do a work at the same pace as the male can do. This is where gender equality can affect the outcomes of the company and future jobs within the particular field.
In conclusion, the nation's culture and rules do affect the genderism in particular sector despite of the fact that male and female should be considered equally. Gender equality in a subject in education can affect the future of the student as well as the nation itself. However, if the subjects are chosen wisely on the basis of the requirement for the future, the idea can work pretty well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
Equally proportionate students for every stream...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... I have to deny with the statement and i will be explaining the reason in the ab...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: greater
... female vary drastically, the males are greater in number are preferred for the outdoor work and ...
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Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: lesser
...ferred for the outdoor work and females lesser in number are more oriented towards doing the hou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, of course, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58873239437 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50074537589 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50985915493 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8345174004 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.6 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242582704815 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853746400426 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760805096933 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160132778939 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680989697258 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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