It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweight the disadvantages?
Many people believe that change is highly beneficial in life, while other prefer a more predictable one, but change comes with both advantages and disadvantages. Personally, I think that the advantages are more significant than the disadvantages.
On the one hand, for people, change means going out of their comfort zones, coming out of their shells, and that means getting to live new experiences that make them learn more about theirselves. One is put in a situation where he has to push his limits and use every single ounce of knowledge possessed, and in that moment he can find out that he can do a lot more than he thought he could. Besides knowledge and new skills, from those experiences one can remain with new friends and acquaintances.
For example, exchange programmes in school or university are a great way for a person to change their routine a little bit, they will experience a new school system, make new friends from different countries and learn things about different culture’s tradition and also daily routine.
On the other hand, there can be a few disadvantages for people who are more introverted or prefer a life with an established routine. People that have anxiety may find it hard to handle change and go out of their comfort zone. Situations like being in a completely new environment and sudden change may disturb their mental health because they do not know how to act; they could panic, overthink everything or even have a depressive episode.
In conclusion, in my opinion the advantages outweights the disadvantages by a lot, however some people are just not meant for big changes, but deviating a bit from daily routine can be beneficial for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, while, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96503496503 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83265988992 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559440559441 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238430408705 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105263658575 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655059519625 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139590779947 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889709315445 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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