It is often said that children learn best by observing the behaviour of their adults and copy it
To what extent do you think the given statement is right
It is fact that childhood stage is the most attractive stage in human life. children learn those what they feel and saw from their elders after observing they seek to inculcate it . However i personally think that there are many other ways contributing them to learn best so, the given statement is not fully right.
There are manifold ways support to teach them better behaviour as compared to adults. first and formost peer interaction is the main factor in moulding children to grow up as they imbibe their habits such as dressing,foods and other life forms . so, they use it in their personal life. moreover the other ways of mass media such as television ,mobile and internet push up them to adopt different lifestyle they choose modern living standard and behaviour so, thiss is also the kind to help them to learn better. in addition to, children can be effected through their atmosphere because, living in well educated society, they learn important aspects such as how to communicate and behave to other. next, innate qualities also a strong way to teach them
On the other hand, it is considered that parents are the first mentor and the children to learn good qualities because adults behaviour help to know them about positives and negatives of the life they influence more and try to copy .thus kids can inculcate better with the help of their parents.Furthermore, their grand parents teach them the value of traditions and cultures which they cant learn from the other ways so elders help a lot in their life for well behaviour
To conclude, children age is the impressionable age they learn important activities from their guardians. however, i think their enviroment and their company also effect most
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, i think, in addition, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94827586207 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6264667421 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527586206897 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.529936869 49.4020404114 335% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.5 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219636472079 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922886370881 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651109466784 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157677852998 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054713261652 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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