some people think that the papers and coins will be replaced completely by online method of payment in the near future
do you agree or disagree with the statement
It
is fact that science and technology has changed the way of work in all
sector of life.Presently,the bank transacations are also turned by
modern credit card method which has lots of merits.However,its misuse
create bad impact on human life. I firmly believe that its negatives
outweight its positives.
there are uncountable reasons support to my point of view.First and
formost,the lack of facility of internet and the credit card.To
illustrate, there are some country side areas where the amenities of
bank or the transaction are low so this is the main reason behind this
issue.some people are less savvy to electronic device.as they are
ineducated and have want of knowledge such as how to use for payment
purposes.so,for those people such method are unhelpful
Over and above,the other drawbacks of this fact,online transaction are
transparent for authority. To be specified,many people tend to save
money but this method reveals the mystery which they dont want to show.
as a result,the are unsatisfied with such saving.Furthermore,it has some
drawbacks which cant be neglected such as theft fraud or
misuse.Therefore,this way dont permit them to use credit cards
On the other hand,technology has numerous merits that cannot be counted
for fingertips.Initially,in this modern tech era internet based
transaction are common.To paradigms, all people use it for their every
type of bill payments such as electricity,water,and for many others so
it is a helpful method for them.What is more using credit cards people
dont need to carry cash because they have to use only such cards
Consequently,it is beneficial to save from thefting or stolen.Thus
people give preference to it.Next,it is best way of time saving also.as
people need to use only swipe the cards,sitting their home inspite of
wondering one place to another
In conclusion,i think internet or technology has positive uses but it is
nonetheless harmful in its misuse or scarity of facilities
- It is often said that children learn best by observing the behaviour of their adults and copy itTo what extent do you think the given statement is right 61
- The given chart show the information about the percentage of youngster in various countries in 2002 and 2007 56
- some people think that the papers and coins will be replaced completely by online method of payment in the near future do you agree or disagree with the statement 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4696485623 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5493151492 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568690095847 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 352.500553191 49.4020404114 714% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 342.4 106.682146367 321% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.6 20.7667163134 301% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.8 7.06120827912 479% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 30.0 4.38176352705 685% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 62.0 5.01903807615 1235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10770526934 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558326124048 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381405359458 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0281159961902 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282785070111 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.6 13.0946893788 272% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.09 50.2224549098 0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 11.3001002004 254% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.95 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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