it is responsibility of schools to teach good behaviour in addition to providing fomal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education has sparked a heating topic in our society. There is a common belief that it is a duty of schools to take charge of teaching their students to have good-manner. in my point of view, i totally agree with this idea to following reasons.
First of all, education environment has substantial impacts on human progress. In the era of competitive workforce, parents have to prioritize their time on working and enhancing living rather than being with their children. As a result, children spend most of time in school. Hence, education condition becomes a vital factor contributing to children’s manner and character.
Secondly, moral behavior is an essential part of valuable citizens. To be more specific, majority of company requires their employees gained both sharp skills and strong discipline. For example, in a large number of conglomerates, people who are loyal and trustworthy are voted by other colleagues for important positions as chief officer or chief accountant.
However, there is a fallacy that formal education is sufficient for students. Some people claims that when pupils used most of time to acquire knowledge, they are more likely to become experts in academic sectors. Although it is true to some extent, I argue that it is unfeasible for students to achieve a comprehensive growth without being taught as exemplary citizens which leads to constrain their ability to gain their career prospects in their future.
In conclusion, although a hostile attitude against teaching moral subjects in schools, I believe that it is necessary for teachers to teach their children a well-rounded education included professional knowledge and good behaviors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ing their students to have good-manner. in my point of view, i totally agree with ...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... and strong discipline. For example, in a large number of conglomerates, people who are loyal and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35849056604 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98785961698 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4698088383 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0705719973745 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0238617286429 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038595763941 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0457763892896 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429811093679 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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