Marriage is a thing which connects the two families and two souls as well as religions and cultures. As it creates a good bonding between everyone. SO i agree with the statement that young people should motivate to marry before 30 and my views are elaborated in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, as people should marry before the age of 30 because at time many people completed their study as well as get settled in their life. However, at the time many women loses their capability to get pregnant as in the age of 30. Sometime, they do not have enough capability to be encourage for that thing. As many people loses their beauty and do not get good relationships and cannot bond with their spouse.
On the other hand, many people think they do not get married before they are 30 because they need time to get settle in their life. They do not want any responsibility on their shoulders expect the study.
In conclusion, I would like to say that people should get marry before 30 and get their responsibilities by the time.
- It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society.Do you agree or disagree? 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 186.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60215053763 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54870466693 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521505376344 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4678519098 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30790204729 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130591793962 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093177996868 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201341425436 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476746960887 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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