It is suggested that everyone wants to have a car, a television,a fridge. Do disadvantages of this development for society outweigh the advantages?
In this new generation a car, a television and a fridge is a very basic needs for all people’s life. In my opinion I think that a car, a television and a fridge can bring about more benifits for society in the long run compared to any advantages it might bring.
Despite the drawback below, I believe in the benefits, the first benifit is that it makes the life easy, a fridge help to store food like mane vegetables, beans and many things we are stored in fridge the food are not spolit for few days, for example people can frozen pizza for few days. A car give several benefits like save our time and car is very necessary thing in 21st century, people are buy more car because of which car is status symbol in 21st century. A television is a source of knowledge and entertainment, watching television people watch news and many other thing. For example most of people are doing full time job so they are watching television on the weekends and they are entertaining and refreshing.
Admitedly there are some issues involved like more people buying car the huge effect on the environment, pollution are highly increase. The environment it is bad so people are do not inhale properly thus causes by people have chances to Heath problems. People are do not have television so more people do not waste time, for example many young children’s waste own time in watching television in 21st century.
In recapitulation, a car, a television and a fridge are rudimentary necessities for individuals and that type of things makes the life better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'need'?
Suggestion: need
...television and a fridge is a very basic needs for all people’s life. In my opinion I ...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...le can frozen pizza for few days. A car give several benefits like save our time and...
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Line 3, column 594, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... news and many other thing. For example most of people are doing full time job so they are wat...
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Line 3, column 619, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...g. For example most of people are doing full time job so they are watching television on ...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
...n the environment, pollution are highly increase. The environment it is bad so people ar...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...The environment it is bad so people are do not inhale properly thus causes by peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, thus, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70955882353 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69705391221 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6919510585 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.1 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271814297334 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122056746248 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058631079017 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190501655427 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540701523415 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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