It is suugested that everyone wants to have a car electricity, and a fridge. Do disadvantage of this development for society outweigh advantage?
It is true that almost every person wished to have a good lifestyle with a car, other household equipment namely television, and a fridge. This essay will argue that the drawback of such things surpasses the advantage. This essay will first demonstrate that how the modern development was a detrimental effect on our health and earth as well, and followed by an analysis of benefits by these concerned equipments.
To begin with, growing consumption of a car makes our planet in a danger zone. Emission of fossil fuels is one of the main reasons for global warming and also air pollution. For instance, recent study from NASA explains that the ozone layer became more damaged than the previous years, and the cause behind that is the excessive use of fossil fuels in the automobiles. Moreover, overwhelming household electric usage by television and refrigerator would develop a shortage of current for future. People are often used by these devices in home merely compounds the problem of insufficient electricity that has become interactable in many parts around the world.
Those opposed to this say that such devices are inevitable for our daily living. Having a ride on a car is time consuming, easy going, likewise, television may reduce stress and give entertainment, fridge might decline the wastage of food. Although this development is beneficial to the individual, uncontrolled use of such things may have people become lazy, obese and so on. Furthermore, over eat of preserved food leads to unhealthy body and disease. For example, studies say that people from urban areas or those who have certain development such as car, television, fridges are more prone to get heart problems because of loss of walking, lack of exercise, unhealthy food pattern like over consumption of preserved food.
In conclusion, every development has sustainable abilities, which may be helpful to peoples day to day lives. Nevertheless, everyone should be wary about this drawback, while continuous appropriation of above-mentioned development, otherwise maximized utilization may outweigh the advantage.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'likewise', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'it is true', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.284946236559 0.247107183377 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.134408602151 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104838709677 0.0946595960268 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0322580645161 0.0501214627716 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.010752688172 0.0437548338989 25% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.145161290323 0.122226691241 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0376344086022 0.0403226058552 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96115892107 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0215053763441 0.0326793684256 66% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0967741935484 0.0861772015684 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0241935483871 0.021408717616 113% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010752688172 0.011925033212 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2122.0 1933.35771543 110% => OK
No of words: 333.0 316.048096192 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.37237237237 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.384384384384 0.374742101984 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285285285285 0.28420135186 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.219219219219 0.203846283523 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.171171171171 0.137316102897 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96115892107 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.037074148 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624624624625 0.56093040696 111% => OK
Word variations: 74.5497552577 60.7387585426 123% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1805213051 49.517814964 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.466666667 127.492653851 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.13333333333 0.814263465372 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 50.7285285285 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 2.63636363636 1.69124875643 156% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35637172886 0.332605444948 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0945720677834 0.102741220458 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0769065643979 0.0668466124924 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.519348464875 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134013921946 0.148594505496 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131767279121 0.134430193775 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450346336552 0.0742795772207 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.259297519686 0.324371583561 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0746370342874 0.0638462369009 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222344540642 0.228012699653 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512753585756 0.058150111329 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.