It is thought that people who travel abroad are more understanding and tolerant of others compared to person who have never gone outside their own country. To what extent do you agree?
It is frequently believed that the people who travel to foreign countries manifest the higher level of tolerance as compared to other people who have never leaved the home country. In my opinion, there can be some reasons associated in accordance with this kind of situation.
People often travel abroad for the sake of business meetings or for the international projects. Likewise, some students might leave their own country to pursue higher education. For example, their can be some fields in which a student has interest in. While, their can be a possibility that, the home country of that student might lack in providing the opportunities for the same. Thus, due to such reasons, people try to extend their boundaries and decide to migrate for some period. On the contrary, during these phase, students or workers learn to try different things and educate themselves to ensconce properly. It has been researched that, a rat having spacious cage has the bigger brain size than the rat living in a small cage. In regards with this, it can be concluded that, people who attempt to overcome their comfort zone might have the greater chance for the development.
On the other hand, there can be a number of people who are dwelling in the same apartment or area for years. Moreover, workers working in the same field for years can also exist. For instance, it has been experimented that, if a person who's been writing a code in same language is given a conundrum related to that same language, despite the experience, that person was unable to solve it. There may be two reasons associated with this. One can be the higher difficulty level of the problem or the problem was esoteric. Moreover, another one can be the limitations in the level of critical thinking. It might be a possibility that, out of box thinking is hindered in such kind of person. Hence, it can be difficult for some people who never tried to leave country to take critical decisions.
Thus, it can be inferred that, people who travel abroad possess the abilities to overcome various types of hurdles. However, home sick people can pinion themselves from taking risks. In my view, people who try to extend their boundaries can increase their experience in variety of situations. On the contrary, people who live in their nation for years can be prudent to take any skeptic steps.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who's
...has been experimented that, if a person whos been writing a code in same language is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, in my view, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85359801489 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55970459831 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7230251819 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9090909091 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3181818182 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77272727273 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214226108787 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737369477737 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822504152152 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17262541298 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670104239416 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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