It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the country side.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion
Many masses think that residing in urban areas is a better choice while others think that the suburbs are the topmost locality to have a good quality of life. This essay will discuss why living in a capital is a best option, but why villages are better for a healthy lifestyle.
Developed cities are now the foremost choice of residence by the people. National and International companies are keen to work in a city because of high literacy rate. As a result, the demand for trained skilled personnel is increasing in these metropolitan areas and results in migrating of individuals from undeveloped to developed areas in search of job. For instance, a company name Airtel which has a head office in Mumbai advertises the recruitment of 1500 staff in the call centre.
However, living a healthy life is too important than any other thing. Some pupils are moving from towns to rural zones because these areas are free from pollution. Besides, the cost of living is much lesser. For instance, Delhi, the national capital of India is now facing the most respiratory problems because of pollution in comparison to the regions which are some distance away from Delhi and are somewhat free from these disorders.
Finally, In my opinion, whether living in a metropolis or a countryside ,depends upon person to person. Take, for instance, to choose a good career; it is better to live in a downtown. In contrast, villages are best as a residential place to live a hale lifestyle because of low-level of tainting.
In conclusion, cities and remotes areas are the choice depends upon the need of persons. This essay discussed how living in developed cities is a better option for seeking job and career growth and how hamlets are proved to be a good residential place because of lesser pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: the
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, however, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93442622951 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6757915189 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531147540984 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4392263576 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182602411356 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616123913576 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460982739673 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106506183669 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518434995336 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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