It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings.this money should be spent on building modern building instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this opinion?
Advent of 21st century witnessing number of transformations in every sector either it is technology or infrastructure but still some people give preference to old architecture and try to renovate them. Although it is too expensive therefore, it is stated that new buildings should be built instead of repairing these old one . I contradict this statement owing to some factors which will be explained in upcoming paragraphs before writing the conclusion.
In this modern world, people give more and more importance to money therefore they just see their profit instead of another things. Due to this , a host of people claim that demos should not repair old houses because it has more expenditure compare to build new building . Therefore it is recommended that inhabitants should build new buildings. Not only these are more guaranteed but also it is suitable to modern infrastructure owing to these factors people can save their bucks also.
In contrast, opponents of this statement argue that money is not everything in life because feelings and emotions are also crucial to make life more joyful . Therefore, dwellers should renovate their old buildings whether it is house or office because their number of memories are attached with these that sooth their soul when they visit there. Therefore , in this exhausted life for taking a sigh of relief ,it is essential to be in touch with old memories and keeping cultural things safe that give a real inner happiness.
In conclusion, although it is undeniable that constructing new buildings are cheaper than repairing to old one and gives a modern touch to infrastructure that suits in modern society but it is also irrefutable that old buildings have been witnessing to people's good and bad that give an internal delight and as it is stated happiness doesn't see cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, well, another thing, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83012330211 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528428093645 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.7163505531 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.272727273 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304241984984 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127440113094 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940432796279 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19234726042 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380810544575 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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