These days, it is argued that learning on the Internet is beneficial or not. From my experience, i think using the Internet for studying is pretty good for two reasons which are setting up self-studying skills and the diverse in points of view,
First of all, Internet can help you set up self studying skill. With high technology, Internet becomes a great assistant of students. You will be able to carry out researches on topics whith the latest information and studying materials which are available there. You can also access to abundant sources of information. Therefore, students will be able to upgrade their knowledge and etablish a vital tool for studying
Internet provides us almost everything including diberse in points of view. In daily life, students can sometimes be confused with different opinions of exercises. When in that situation they can have thair online friends help them to find out the most appropriate solutions. It does not only widen your knowledge but also your relationship.
To sum up, the Internet in particular and everything in our life in general has its own pros and cons. We should know it inside before we decide to judge it with the disadvantages.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Phuc Minh Phuong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d with different opinions of exercises. When in that situation they can have thair o...
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Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help them find' instead.
Suggestion: help them find
...tion they can have thair online friends help them to find out the most appropriate solutions. It ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, i think, in general, in particular, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99497487437 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78433681542 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663316582915 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.298510603 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3636363636 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146715756632 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455881298642 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410979764892 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803435071375 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534095919984 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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