It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both ideas by giving your opinion.
"success includes 1% talent and 99% hard-working.", Albert Einstein said, I do agree with this statement in any cases of our life. people who have talent are more lucky than the others. however, if they want to become succeed in their life, they have to practise, practise and practise for both the gifted or not. any people can become a person that they want, they admire if they try with al their willingness. In the first view, I really disagree with it. Some people say:" the gifted people were born with their talent available, so they can learn things, especially the art subjects or sports, people who do not have any talent can not learn these well", they are both right and wrong. Of course that, people with talent can learn things faster but it does not mean the people who do not have knack can not learn these. Like for instance my idol who is a dancer, when he had the first lesson with his teacher, his tutor told him that he was not having any talent and he could not become a dancer. however, with all his effort, he practise everyday and now he is a famous dancer with a lot of fans. For another view, I can not agree with this statement any more. Maybe of if we do not have talent will spend more time learning something, but it will depend on how much we try. For example, we all know about the famous football player Ronaldo, he is known for his talented but people in the world remember more about his willingness to practise day by day to be one of the best footballer nowadays. when we have enough these 3 conditions, we can be a success person:willingness, good tutor, and motivation. Anyone can be taught to be a good sport player and musician even he is gifted or not. In conclusion, people can be taught to become master in any subjects. it just depends on their willingness not because of their gifted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...alent and he could not become a dancer. however, with all his effort, he practise every...
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Suggestion: practises
...ancer. however, with all his effort, he practise everyday and now he is a famous dancer ...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, really, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48816568047 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55608974062 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494082840237 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5557152775 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8125 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245197664621 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925038609934 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668500330955 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245197664621 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.