Job satisfaction is more important than earning a high salary.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some people opt for jobs paid well while others prefer jobs they find satisfying even if the salary is low. I admit that it is important to earn enough for living, in my opinion, job satisfaction is more important than money earned.
Job satisfaction increases productivity. If people love their jobs, no one has to force them to go to work and supervise them. They do their jobs with utmost interest and concentration. This interest they show automatically improve the results and help them achieve more in less time.
However, some people choose jobs because of their salary. They work only to achieve more money not to get pleasure. They also have no content to their jobs. In this case, those people have to push themselves to go to office. If they dislike to do their work, they may make more errors and it might take longer to finish. As a result, they have to stay late at work. The long working hours will eventually affect their health and family life. As an example, the IT industry pays well but the jobs are extremely stressful and demanding.
People work with satisfying may not always get well salary at the beginning. But over time , worker's enthusiasm and dedication will make the job lucrative. For example, there is a lot of people who turned their hobbies into successful carrier options. It was their love for the job that ultimately helped them.
Taking everything into consideration, job satisfaction is certainly more important than the money earned. If people love their job, eventually, they may also earn well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86363636364 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5747244752 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55303030303 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4091328331 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.2 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216741576111 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07446141597 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785199251277 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153928436392 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777140329265 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.02 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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