A large number of deaths are caused by road accidents.
Why do so many road accidents accour? Make recommendations that would help to reduce the number of road accidents.
It is true that road accidents lead to many drawbacks for people. Research shows the increasing number of demises related this issue. I argue that inexperienced drivers and carelessness while driving are two major causes of road accidents. Due to this problems, strict regulation given by the authority and strict licensing of drivers would be effective to prevent continuation of road accidents.
First of all, it is undoubted that young and untrained drivers driving the vehicle become common phenomenon nowaday. Many of them start to drive without proper training and controlling from adult. In countries such as Indonesia, we can easily find youngsters under 15 years old drive a motorcycle. It is risky because they lack information in regard to the rule in road that would make fatal effects not only for themselves but also for thr other people. Furthermore, the carelessness of drivers also have bad impact toward road safety. Researches show that drunken drivers for the example, are one of reasons for the accidents. It is true because people who drives vehicles under the influence of alcohol tend to loss their control on vehicle.
Accordingly some measures could be taken to prevent this problems. The first solution is the authority should give heavy penalties to drivers who are drunk. They also must implement strict rules vis-à-vis alcohol currency. Moreover, proper licensing of individuals given by the government appears to be a promising solution to this problem.
To conclude, many traffict offences commited by the drivers take people’s lives. As a result, solution such as strict regulation given by the authority and proper licensing should be taken to handle this problems.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Due to this problems, strict regulation given by the authority and strict licensing of drivers would be effective to prevent continuation of road accidents.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and problems
It is true because people who drives vehicles under the influence of alcohol tend to loss their control on vehicle.
It is true because people who drive vehicles under the influence of alcohol tend to lose their control on vehicles.
The first solution is the authority should give heavy penalties
The first solution is that the authority should give heavy penalties
Sentence: Accordingly some measures could be taken to prevent this problems.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and problems
Sentence: As a result, solution such as strict regulation given by the authority and proper licensing should be taken to handle this problems.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and problems
Sentence: First of all, it is undoubted that young and untrained drivers driving the vehicle become common phenomenon nowaday.
Error: nowaday Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: It is risky because they lack information in regard to the rule in road that would make fatal effects not only for themselves but also for thr other people.
Error: thr Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: To conclude, many traffict offences commited by the drivers take people's lives.
Error: traffict Suggestion: traffic
Error: commited Suggestion: committed
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
Double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
No. of Words: 272 350 //try to put more content to get high marks.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 272 350
No. of Characters: 1400 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.061 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.147 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.661 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 84 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.28 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.706 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.49 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.057 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... major causes of road accidents. Due to this problems, strict regulation given by th...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sia, we can easily find youngsters under 15 years old drive a motorcycle. It is r...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Accordingly,
...nd to loss their control on vehicle. Accordingly some measures could be taken to prevent...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...some measures could be taken to prevent this problems. The first solution is the aut...
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Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...per licensing should be taken to handle this problems.
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'such as', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'in regard to', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275747508306 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.156146179402 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102990033223 0.0946595960268 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0365448504983 0.0501214627716 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0365448504983 0.0437548338989 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126245847176 0.122226691241 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0398671096346 0.0403226058552 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78683018315 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0398671096346 0.0326793684256 122% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0730897009967 0.0861772015684 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0232558139535 0.021408717616 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00996677740864 0.011925033212 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1714.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 316.048096192 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.30147058824 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.411764705882 0.374742101984 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.323529411765 0.28420135186 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.220588235294 0.203846283523 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.169117647059 0.137316102897 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78683018315 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 59.2840329157 60.7387585426 98% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7707800636 49.517814964 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.823529412 127.492653851 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.764705882353 0.814263465372 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 48.3529411765 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.92753623188 1.69124875643 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330960982592 0.332605444948 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0606123103714 0.102741220458 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0462634715179 0.0668466124924 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.470776960284 0.534860350844 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13770789522 0.148594505496 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118396593497 0.134430193775 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832289313544 0.0742795772207 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.337935577648 0.324371583561 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0751563777921 0.0638462369009 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216842010789 0.228012699653 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135786497346 0.058150111329 234% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.