In recent years supermarkets and the largest shopping centers have gained immense popularity because of a range of conveniences they commonly provide consumers with. Therefore, I totally believe that this is a quite assertive trend.
To start with, most people are favoring shopping complexes for the rational reason that they can get everything for their life just in one building as groceries, clothing, electronics, and many others. Large malls can suit not only shopper’s needs in buying something but they render much more than simple attention. For instance, shopping areas have a good air-conditioned system, areas for leisure and game zones for kids. Moreover, all facilities are provided by trained friendly staff to assist customers with their shopping requirements. As a result, people can obtain a piece of rest while they make decisions what they should buy due to efficient time saving.
In addition, shopping centers have a various production lines for a very convenient price. This means that large supermarkets and malls stock products in a large quantity which makes them to be able to sell items in prices cheaper than in small local shops, whereas the goods they sell are good or premium quality. For example, many supermarket nets run offers and discount coupon schemes, where people can buy something additional for a very low price or can take it for a gift. This is due to large store’s possibilities to have trustworthy partnership with manufacturers and direct dropshipping.
To conclude, since supermarkets and stores provide customers with cheap and superior quality items and make shopping more convenient and beneficial for the end users, I am completely sure that the prevalence of the large stores and shopping malls is an advantageous feature in oue life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2787456446 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90675044004 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616724738676 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7485471697 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179252840301 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661881434183 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579385828927 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10785493731 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418369346989 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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