In the last 20 years there have been significant development in the field of information technology by IT for example the world wide web and communication by email. However, future development in It are likely to have more negative effects than positive. To what extent do you agree with this view.
As the world is advancing , people are now seeing the need for information technology. These recent decades, the importance of IT have become useful.Despite this Devon IT world, it's more perceived to have more adverse effect than benefits gained from it. In my opinion, i strongly agree that IT will bring more disadvantages than advantages and this will be discussed in my essay.
On one hand, information technology is beneficial in work place as it's aid easy communication. It has help to reduce stress amongst employees and employers because it allows effective communication within them. For instance,meetings and conferences can be done via skype and telephone without physically been present. More so, it will also help in reducing the financial burden organisations will pass through in acquiring space for offices and maintenance. Has these work can be done from employees home.
On the other hand,one of the disadvantages of IT in the future will includes,rendering more people jobless. Since work can be done with the use of computers, searching and sending messages via the internet, organisations will see no need to employe more staffs. This will result in reducing staff strength and more work load on the them. Such is seen in the recent journals published by Nigeria work force, that banking industry will now appreciate the need to use automated teller machines which will be programmed by pesonenels. In addition,if IT is used more in the future, worker can use part of official hours to attend to their personal needs such as taking children to school and going for shopping and this hours will still be paid for by the organisation they work for.
To conclude with, technology have been helpful in the last decades.Although,i believe it will bring more negative impact such as increasing job opportunities and staffs will use office time for domestic purposes more than the positive effect it will bring in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10691823899 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04374670781 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550314465409 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4440595093 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168711155131 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630121487196 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540980959218 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127563457285 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564598209462 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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