In the last 20 years, there have been significant development in the field of information technology (IT). For example, the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future.
To what extent do you agree or disagtee with this view?
Automation has made our life faster and more convenient. Notwithstanding , I completely believe that the downsides of modern technologies outweigh its benefits, especially given how rapidly it is evolving.
To begin with, our use of technological devices constantly draws us away from what is most innate us, including physical touch, which is vital to our well-being and survival. My generation, for instance, relies heavily on computer for working, studying and entertaining. They are, therefore, more likely to turn to video games and social media as stress relievers rather than confiding in friends or relatives face-to-face. Furthermore, a number of virtual dating games, such as Rinko, allow subscribers to completely disengage from intimate interactions. Instead, they become obsessed with the "perfect" characters they have become attracted to on their screen. It may prevent them from feeling satisfied and forming healthy real-life relationships. As these situations escalate, self-isolation is inevitable.
Aside from mental disadvantages, automation may lead to a future with higher unemployment rate. This can be seen in new inventions that are popping up around the world. Robots have started replacing human jobs, including nurses, waiters, and even teachers, with machines that lack compassion and understanding. Humanity as a whole will suffer if unemployed depend on the government for financial support. This is due to the fact rather than investing in economy and infrastructure, the majority of national budgets will be spent on financing destitute citizens.
In conclusion, my opinion is that modern technology may lead to a world with warmth and compassion, as well as a lack of employment opportunities for humans. In the regard, automation should be used with caution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ter and more convenient. Notwithstanding , I completely believe that the downsides...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69003690037 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33307290649 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693726937269 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0430451553 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104909347337 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029880687225 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0221098595067 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0586401789642 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01430722538 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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