In association generally golden-ager hold the higher position like leaders and instructor. However, group of people believe that younger leader is superior to geriatric people. According to my opinion, I would disagree with aforementioned statement. My inclination along with the relevant justification are elaborated further.
Supporting aforementioned personal viewpoint, the most logical argument put forward is that geriatric leader have more experience than young leader. BY this, I mean that they work more than newcomer on that particular market. Another fundament is that we can have more experience of fluctuation in market. Because, after working for so many year they can identify the current market trend by their personal observation.
Furthermore, advantages of well-known person in market. This convey, leader are known by all the competitor that present in market so if any problem rise at that we can seek for help from our revels also. Besides this, they have very good convincing that build over a years which help organization to expand business.
However, some people counter argue with respective claims. To commence with young leader know the cutting-edge technology to improve productivity. As, using latest technology for production it will consume less time and also reduce the cost of production. Besides this, leader can work for long hours for benefit of company. For instance, organization often encounter with some urgent task which are more profitable than normal one, so at that time leader can work more if they are young for benefit of the company.
In conclusion, I believe that critical position of authority should be given to senior staff members for the certain reasons mentioned rather than the young.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'many years'.
Suggestion: many years
...n market. Because, after working for so many year they can identify the current market tr...
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Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...at we can seek for help from our revels also. Besides this, they have very good conv...
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Line 4, column 266, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a year' or simply 'years'?
Suggestion: a year; years
...ve very good convincing that build over a years which help organization to expand busin...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'using the latest'.
Suggestion: using the latest
...technology to improve productivity. As, using latest technology for production it will consu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for instance, i mean, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44485294118 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85231335951 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606617647059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5652604001 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1176470588 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158093031482 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539418779696 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606170971349 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847310079081 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619610645302 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.