There is an observation that during the working day or in leisure time most of the jobholder are either doing less exercise or don’t do any kind of exercise and as a result they invite certain health related issues. There are several root causes are behind this trend. However, certain solution must be implemented to tackle the issue. Both the observed causes as well as relevant remedies are elaborated further.
Discussing the root causes behind worker not having suitable workout. The most common one is that worker use to stay at office all the day. Because, nowadays firm are making their employee to work more than 10 hours a day due to which there is less time for any other activity. Another prime cause is that don’t have physical stamina for doing workout. This is to convey that after long hours of working human body get exaggerated and need some rest to recover from over working. Moreover, family is also crucial for them so they give sufficient time to their family member.
However, several possible measures can be taken to limit the effect of this problem. The Foremost one is that provide exercise machine at work place. To justify, by providing workout equipment at work place jobholder get inspiration to do workout and not only this it also stimulate mind. One more solution is that, explain then about the benefits of exercise. By doing this, they get knowledge about the exercise and merits the same. To cap it all, spread awareness regarding the advantages of exercise amount the jobholders.
In conclusion, it can be understood that there are many causes of worker not doing any physical workout. Such as working hours and family commitments, But by providing equipment and knowledge about exercise this issue can be tackle.
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- Some people think that the modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 367, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...kle the issue. Both the observed causes as well as relevant remedies are elaborated furthe...
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Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...out. The most common one is that worker use to stay at office all the day. Because,...
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Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stimulates'?
Suggestion: stimulates
...to do workout and not only this it also stimulate mind. One more solution is that, explai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94949494949 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46403002355 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548821548822 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4627891614 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34687715447 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094212627134 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738248077584 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21211445509 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043323270446 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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