Leaders and directors in an organization are normally older people. Some people think a younger leader would be better. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that higher positions are usually held by the elderly in many organizations. While some people believe that the young will perform better in leadership roles, I believe that senior leaders are more effective in managing a company than juniors.
First of all, this makes it difficult for young people to compete with the elderly when it comes to experience. Those members who have enough experience are able to manage more effectively in order to lead individuals in an organization. The reason for this is that commercial and business issues are more likely to require the leaders to have not only the knowledge to address situations but also a solid mind to keep calm and find feasible solutions. As a result, many years of experience in a relative position provide opportunities for elderly people to become better than applicants who are quite young and begin to take on tasks.
Another advantage of the elderly is that they seem to receive assistance and support from other members of an organization. Because they work for longer periods of time, seniors can better understand and appreciate their co-workers. It results from a communication skill between a person and others’ approval, which can have significant effects on the leader’s success. On the other hand, young members need more time to contribute to their company in order to prove that they are worthy.
In conclusion, I hold the opinion that powerful positions should be held by senior employees rather than juniors for the reasons mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0790513834 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76727833218 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581027667984 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.126924523 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.818181818 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131423364279 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468962688593 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432522874312 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078680756976 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429754904763 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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