Leaders and directors in an organization are normally older people. Some people think a younger leader would be better. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people hold the opinion that high positions such as manager and director should be predominantly held by aged members of an organization. Although there is a school of thought that younger people can take on those positions well, I firmly believe that more mature adults will be better applicants to undertake this responsibility for leading a business.
Having significantly more experience is one of the benefits of older people. In terms of experience, those who gain a remarkable amount can perform more effectively in order to manage other individuals in a group than those who have less. Furthermore, it is true that governing a business is an extremely difficult matter, which requires the leaders and directors in charge to have not only adequate knowledge but also strong nerves to calmly find feasible solutions and flexibly address problematic issues. Thus, there is no denying that senior workers are more likely to satisfy those demands than junior ones who start their careers.
Another reason is that older people tend to be given more support and respect from their colleagues than novices. Due to having spent a long time working in a company and interacting with different kinds of people, they are able to understand their peers’ desires or characters. As a result, it is easier for more mature people to gain approval and acceptance from their co-workers, while younger ones need more time to have an opportunity to prove their value and develop good personal communication skills.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that crucial positions should be held by more mature workers than younger ones because of their experience and reputation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8004408824 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614814814815 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6494281763 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.4 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168376760128 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676750038008 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523564112671 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104752428363 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466507593962 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.