Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
In recent years, it has been argued whether putting criminals to prison with longer time or alerting the punishment by other programs is more suitable in many parts of the world. While there are many merits of sending offenders to prison, I strongly believe that using alternative methods is better to decrease the criminal rate.
On the one hand, there are plenty of reasons why many people realize that lawbreakers should be imprisoned as long as possible. There is no doubt that innocent citizens are more likely to have a sense of safety and security when people who commit crimes are kept in jail. If the government imposes stricter punishment, it could stop potential criminals intending to engage in unlawful activities. Moreover, prisoners are able to spend their time examining their wrong activities in jail, meaning that they could have more opportunities to become good citizens when they rehabilitate.
On the other hand, I find evidence that applying alternative methods can be more beneficial to inhabitants, despite the strong argument above. Obviously, no one can agree that judgment or law is used as a punishment. Besides, criminals should have the opportunity to be released from prison and rehabilitate in the community. Instead of putting offenders in jail longer, the authorities could send criminals to rehabilitation programmes. In addition, offenders can also take part in some community service which brings benefits not only for them but also for the society.
In conclusion, I completely agree that the merits of alerting methods to punishment such as rehabilitation and benefits for the community outweigh the advantages of increasing time in prison, in terms of safety and self-esteem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28467153285 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93115456956 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580291970803 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7617365739 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.096563258112 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347463175327 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0234671625829 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583067933663 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019849088229 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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