Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem.
What are the causes of this? How can this be solved?
There are concerns that a significant increase in the urban population in urban areas is leading to extremely serious issues. Although there are various reasons for this unwanted phenomenon, people can take some measures to tackle it.
It should be noted that many crucial factors remarkably contribute to the population boom in megacities. One of them is that governments tend to allocate their national budgets to invest in sprawling cities rather than other places. Thus, it seems more attractive for people to settle down in cities where they can conveniently utilize facilities and platforms such as public healthcare and schools. Another reason is that people are able to have better career-related opportunities in municipalities. As investors prefer to choose the financial hubs, both residents and migrants are likely to move there to seek jobs with higher incomes.
However, there are some effective solutions to minimize the growing population development in urban centers. First, national funds should be reasonably financed to improve infractures such as roads and welfare buildings in rural and remote places, which will enable citizens to find convenience there and no longer need to migrate to crowded cities. Second, the authorities should impose policies to encourage socio-economic investments by individuals and groups in rural and remote areas, which would result in a decrease in employees in cities. Furthermore, relocating firms and factories should be considered to help central places reduce pressures from lack of land and overpopulation.
In conclusion, it is easy to realize that popular infractures and chances for career promotion in cities have still been factors that make people migrate there. However, I believe that people are able to address the problems of a growing population in big cities by allocating money, introducing incentives, and relocating industrial factories to other places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, still, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59183673469 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01060184159 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615646258503 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5282038617 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.461538462 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0828607863009 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.028763869373 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308234566397 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538765017585 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03999762727 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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