The leaders of most organizations tend to be older people. However, some argue that younger people make better bosses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is said that young people manage organizations well. Although I agree with this statement, I think that organizations must have both young and old leaders.
Young people are capable of becoming better leaders because of the following reasons. To begin with, young people can catch up with trends, which could be advantages for their organizations. For instance, young bosses can come up with creative ideas to boost the brand’s image. In addition, young leaders are often open-minded and easy-going, so personnel feel comfortable work with their leader. Of course, If employees can easily to share with their bosses, the work will progress more, promoting the development of the company.
Old bosses have experience in leading organizations for the following reasons. First, experience is the most important thing. As a result, they can assess the situation more carefully and make informed decisions more easily. Second, old leaders are often more respected by others. Therefore, their voice will be valuable with personnel in organizations, if leaders are young, they can hardly to influence other employees.
In conclusion, because of the mentioned reasons, I believe that elder people are the more experienced person to lead their organizations, but I think younger people are capable of becoming better leaders.
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- The leaders of most organizations tend to be older people However some argue that younger people make better bosses To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, of course, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45145631068 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88245298417 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572815533981 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8272446453 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3846153846 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180734844164 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729638363575 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501402921127 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12225689369 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214137401516 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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