.There is no doubt that investigating history plays a crucial role in society while several people claim that things that occurred in the past do not have any worth at recent. I completely disagree with this statement by virtue of exploring past was always efficient for the public.
To begin with, every people must know their past and worth it. If we do not look to the past it will be inevitable negative consequences which are mold in the future so that each mistake were done by our ancestors will be easy to avoid. Aside from preventing mistakes history impacts to increase responsibility for our country. To illustrate, in Japan as a result of local policy government implemented a large-scale program that provided a history events celebration so this act helped for a populization their past cultures and heroes to worldwide. In these days, a vast majority of tourists prefer to visit Japan only to explore their stories and also to participate in events such as the "Samurai party or Imperator day".
Another important point is that the patriotism of inhabitants has considerable value to every country, that's why the main purpose to enhance love to own country it is width teaching history everywhere. By realizing how country appeared people start to appreciate own country history because it is the only a method for boost peoples conscious. In addition, they will understand this value of history and start help to avoid several issues related to own country.
To sum up, researching history can severely impact on peoples minds but it requires a huge effort to propagate it between the crowd.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Line 1, column 2, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...as considerable value to every country, thats why the main purpose to enhance love to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, in addition, no doubt, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01111111111 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81589891404 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.301389912 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.096850494431 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379285996766 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028414202021 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0563385455655 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445698927022 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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