Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If they are not taught, many are at risk of dying out.
In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English. Shall we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how
Languages is necessary for each people because it plays a role in communicating with others people. Nowadays, English is the most popular , which is considered a national language or a essential subject in many countries. However it is not the reason to say that lacal languages shouldn't be taught and learnt more. I completely belive that we can protect our local languages well.
Firstly, it is obvious that English is an international language , a national language of almost well- developed counties such as: USA, England, Canada, Austalia, etc. In addition, the employers only pay attention to candidates who have good English. That is to say, people who can speaks English fluently have job opportunities and high salary. English is more important in future generation when the managers are from different parts of the world. Futhermore, the students can study
in many different countries where have excellent education, facilities, and professors. From going abroad, the students will have much experience , many friends.
However, I think local languages should be taught in order to protect them in the future. The poems, books need to be perserve. Protecting mother tounge helps us not to get lost cultures and custom. There are a lot of ways. The first way is that parents should talk with their childrens in mother tounge regularly or tell them stories, jokes, etc. The second ones is that the school must arrange trips to historic building (at least four times a year) for childens. By these ways, the childen can improve their knowledge about history and language. As a result, they will fell proud of their countries.
Consequently, English is necessary for each people. Despite their benefits, we can't stop learning and teaching mother tounge. we should develop both these language .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, well, at least, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20274914089 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70647770091 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628865979381 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7121333722 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0952380952 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8571428571 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172665235724 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442407400412 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370338908202 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877548822092 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366595720447 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.