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Hi
How are you doing? Sorry I didn’t reply sooner because I’ve been very busy lately. I just received your email. I am writing to you today to offer some kind of advice. Also, I thank you for taking me into confidence in order to consult about a decision regarding your work. I am sorry about your current situation, I am sure we can brainstorm something to relieve you from this issue. As you said, I knew that you work long days. My first advice is to you, no matter what, you have to put your family first. On top of that you should change your job or career. Also, there is one more way, you should tell your boss to reduce your working hours. In addition, the best thing to do is meditate alone for 5 minutes in every morning. I’d recommend that you shouldn’t worry and get stressed. Then you will have time for everything, like family and friends. Always be patient! I hope you my suggestion would help you decide what is best for you. If you have any questions, please ask. I can always contact whenever you need something or a hand of help or talk about anything. I am ready to help as much as I can, as always. I look forward to your reply, just don’t wait too long, because I’m worried. Think carefully about my advice. As I said before, I hope my advice will be useful for you.
Sincerely
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- letter 11
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 56
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time Which of these situations do think is better 73
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time Which of these situations do think is better 63
- What are the qualities of good university 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi How are you doing? Sorry I didn’t reply ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 852, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: Be Always
...or everything, like family and friends. Always be patient! I hope you my suggestion would...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1110, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...I am ready to help as much as I can, as always. I look forward to your reply, just don...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1118, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...dy to help as much as I can, as always. I look forward to your reply, just don’t ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, regarding, so, then, in addition, kind of, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34008097166 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2627196783 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623481781377 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2402042071 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.6 106.682146367 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.35 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 13.0946893788 40% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.0 12.4159519038 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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