living big city
Some points of view assume that it is becoming more difficult for people living in big cities while the others have an opposite notion. On some aspects, the life in big cities can arouse people easy feeling, but I believe that feeling of difficulty far outweigh.
On the one hand, people living in the metropolis can find more convenient because of some reasons. Firstly, people have more chance to approach with a variety of job opportunities to commensurate with their capability. Therefor, it is easier for people to seek a decent work with the good income and appropriate policies to enhance their life on both mental and physical health. Besides, one of the chief elements makes people more reasonable in city’s life is through meeting a range of people with city lifestyle. They will easily broaden their own group of connections and network which will offer more opportunities. Additionally, urban area provides more overall facilities and knowledge about health in comparison with rural area so city dwellers can access to the more modern medicine.
On the other hand, the life in big cities is more difficult than easy. On the social aspect, the crime rate is on the increase as a result of the large-scale migration from the countryside to city. The prevalence of social evil will threaten social security and plague the life of people. In addition, in the early day, the rapid advancement of technology contaminated environment and this condition is more serious in the metropolis. Hence, city dweller has to cope with an abundance of polluted issues on a regular basic such as food contamination, the contamination of water sources, sort of thing. On the personal aspect, the cut-throat rivalry and hectic life can pose a dire stress for people and lead to a range of the worst possible outcomes. A typical evidence of it is the burst of the enormous number of mental diseases like depression or anxiety, that reduce for sure their quality of life.
In conclusion, while there are some elements make people living in large cities easier, I presume that the difficulty is much more than it.
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| 2019-11-28 | Thang Nguyen Duc | 73 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, well, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9604519774 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73854576883 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54802259887 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4818121673 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.75 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233521912635 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815664913801 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994344502174 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181179051325 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977478629016 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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