Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, thanks to modernization, people tend to work and study abroad for better living condition. However, some people argue that it can cause a huge of problems, even practical or social ones. And I definitely agree with this statement since I think this trend has both benefits and drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that language is the connection between different cultures. In contrast, language can also cause serious disadvantages for immigrants, especially the new one. First, not being able to speak local language can affect their social communication and every day activities such as shopping or working. Secondly, it is problematic that crossing a new language to make friends and start a living when coming to a foreign country becomes one of the most anxieties and other related problems can otherwise become devastating to a person's mental health.
However, despite a large of negative problems, language might not be so serious and can be resolved through a long time studying and getting along well with this native one. Furthermore, with modern technology like smartphones and laptops, the learning process becomes easier to overcome. Similarly, internet offers a variety of translate software, which help immigrants reaching this language confidently without time-consuming. Last but not least, it can be seen that environment of language might affect students, for example, students who choose to study abroad can matter the native language faster than whom study in motherland.
In conclusion, foreign language affects us in some of areas and in my opinion, at first time, it can be more bewildering than convenient.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34099616858 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91423074896 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63601532567 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6895033409 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9166666667 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249481584009 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835069088392 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426173541249 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136696370338 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416750776773 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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