Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is obvious that spending time in a country that does not communicate by using our mother tongue would bring benefits for us. In fact, it is an adventure that can help us expose to new things that we have never had in our life. However, speaking a foreign language would create obstacles that have detrimental effects on both social and practical aspects. Thus, in my opinion, I strongly agree with the statement that severe social and practical problems could be conjured up when we stay in a country where we have to use another language to communicate. There are two reasons supporting my opinion.
First, there will be misunderstandings. In fact, when using language that we are not comfortable with, the possibility of not conveying the right idea is high, creating embarrassing situations that we would never forget. For example, when I traveled to the US, I met a guy on a dating app, and we decided to have dinner together. He asked me which food I would like to have and I told him that I am a meat-eater. Then, when he came to pick me up, he drove me to his apartment directly. I asked him for a reason. And then he just showed my message and explained the meaning of it to me. I felt embarrassed at that time because I did not know the meaning of it in English is totally different from what I thought. This was an unforgettable remembrance that I want to wipe out.
Second, without language, we cannot have a facilitated life in a foreign country. In fact, people use language as a tool to convey what they need, especially in emergencies. For example, a friend of mine, he went to Taiwan to study. However, he did not know a word of Mandarin. One time, he felt pains in his stomach, but he was afraid of going to the hospital since he did not know how to speak with them. He stayed at home for two days without any aid. On the third day, pains reached their acme. He had to ask for help from a Vietnamese student who is fluent in Mandarin. We can imagine that without the know-Mandarin person, my friend would end up in a more severe situation than he did. This case study would play a significant role in stressing the importance of using language to communicate.
In conclusion, we should be cautious of living in a country where we have to communicate by using a different language. There will be obstacles that we need to tackle. Without sufficient language skill, the possibility of encountering severe social or practical issues would be high. Each person should equip themselves with a robust language skill that helps them significantly in their daily life in a foreign country.
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree with this statement 56
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... we have never had in our life. However, speaking a foreign language would create...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, then, third, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 7.30460921844 342% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 95.0 24.0651302605 395% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 41.998997996 195% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2671.0 1615.20841683 165% => OK
No of words: 577.0 315.596192385 183% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62911611785 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90110439584 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78903488361 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 176.041082164 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487001733102 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 839.7 506.74238477 166% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 26.0 5.43587174349 478% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 16.0721442886 218% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8646631378 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3142857143 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4857142857 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.02857142857 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142766714404 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355467666559 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523484852493 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099231472931 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749125330529 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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