Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
People have been traveling abroad for ages to work, study, etc. However, some do not advocate the idea of going abroad as they believe that accommodating in a country where speaking a foreign language is mandatory leads to numerous social and practical problems. I agree with this statement but i think that it also brings us some benefits.
People who object to living in a country with a different dialect have their arguments. The first thing to regard is whether they can fit in with the community there or not. Each region of the world has its own traditional and cultural heritage, so newcomers are likely to have difficulties in adapting to new customs. If they can not, life in another country will definitely become harsh for them. The situation can even get worse unless they are able to speak the local dialect. Moreover, the inability to speak the foreign speech results in severe consequences when someone come to a new country. Because hardly anyone share the same language with them, they literally barely communicate with other people, which leads to depression and anxiety in the long run.
On the other hand, travel abroad to a place with a different dialect is considered beneficial. First and foremost, it will force them to learn the new language so as to adapt to the society. Therefore, they can chat with others and discover more about the traditions and customs of that place. Another factor contributing to the increasing number of people going abroad is the chance to widen their relationships and make friends from all over the globe. Thanks to this, there is a likelihood that their lives will become more exciting and amusing. Last but not least, working abroad often enables people to find a better-paid job than in their country. Thus, a lot more people are learning the local dialect with a view to get a job with higher salary in a foreign country.
In summary, arriving at a country with a different speech has its own specific positive effects and drawbacks. The decision whether to go abroad or not should be depended on each person's ability, desire combining with other external factors.
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subject like Science and Technology are more important than History Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- Despite the increased access to education a significant number of people cannot read or write What are the disadvantages and what action should the government take 73
- With the rapid advancement of communication technology eg smart phones tablets and other mobile devices some people believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- Despite the increased access to education a significant number of people cannot read or write What are the disadvantages and what action should the government take 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Line 2, column 624, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'shares'.
Suggestion: shares
...to a new country. Because hardly anyone share the same language with them, they liter...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ll force them to learn the new language so as to adapt to the society. Therefore, they c...
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Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...broad or not should be depended on each persons ability, desire combining with other ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as to, i think, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8650137741 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56199531974 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559228650138 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0229676376 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9473684211 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196107500338 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606196784052 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470368991332 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12590931531 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660305790519 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.