It is often debated that living in a foreign country with a different language spoken by the public can bring about several social and practical problems. I do agree with this opinion and I will justify my support through the following paragraphs.
Regarding social problems, a person who does not fully grasp on the language of the country they immigrate to may sometimes be misuderstood by indigenous people. They may unintentionally express something that be considered disrespectful. As a result, local folks would keep their distance from the newcomer and he or she may lose their confidence and end up suffering from a lot of mental diseases. Furthermore, lack of understanding the foreign language spoken by the country-of-destination will often can lead to unintentionally assaulting to local customs and traditional values which in turn others become protective against them. For example, drinking alcohol is forbidden in Muslim countries and drunken people are severely criticized.
In terms of practical problems. For a person who is unable to understand the spoken language of the local public, even doing the simplest day-to-day task such as finding an address, ordering food, and taking full advantage of university courses could be problematic. From a personal experience, when I have been in China where their language is completely different than mine, for buying a simple item from a grocery store I face a lot of difficulties to convey my wish to the salesperson.
In conclusion, for living in a new country with a different language passing related language courses should be prioritized. Otherwise, one could encounter a lot of social and practical problems that could make life intolerable for the newcomer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32363636364 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21442204617 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603636363636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6528700783 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225470952075 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07984471992 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049478164108 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149081262007 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499943799162 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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