Opinion is divided as to whether living in a foreign country and speaking the local language may lead to a social problem. In my opinion, I disagree with a conflict that comes from language because people always understand foreigners very well, misunderstanding in conversation is acceptable. As well, people who live in a foreign land has the skill to adapt themselves to a different culture.
There are many people who live in a foreign country for many purposes; studying, working or just living. In a specific city like Bangkok, there are over millions of Chinese live in there. Many of them were unwilling to speak Thai even it is the local language, so that contracting between local people and foreigners always had trouble due to misunderstanding, and led to a social problem. However, these days many foreigners, coming from Europe and China, start to speak Thai. Consequently, communication between these people is far more efficient. Even though a foreigner may not talk fluently but local people always try to communicate with them patiently.
Moreover, it is well known that human has a special skill for adapting themselves to a different culture or situation very well. Thus, living in a foreign country is possible. First, they learn how to communicate with local people which takes a quite long time. In the meantime, they are learning behaviors and cultures from experience. For example, driving in Thailand and Australia are similar in terms of the right side, but rules and norms are not. Most of Thais may have unusual driving habits. Later on, they can adapt from people’ warning or watching. The example shows that human has a flexibility skill, unlike other mammals. So, foreigners can live properly in any country as long as they are not criminals or burglaries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinion is divided as to whether living in a foreign country and speakin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06397306397 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84784003017 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4335646134 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5555555556 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245048722465 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801343381864 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853782118313 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182845045003 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693906962867 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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