Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do tou agree or disagree with this statement?
Recently, there are a lot of controversies regarding that living in foreign countries causes critical problems. Some people argue that people who live in where they should use foreign languages do not experience any problems. however, regarding the topics, I partially agree with the idea.
To begin with, there are several reasons why I am in favour of this issue. First, that people who live in a foreign country can not use local language makes problems of communicating with domestic citizens. For example, when I live in Australia for working, I happened to make trouble with domestic person. I called police office to explain this incident. however, I could not be supported by them since I could not speak english well. Second, immigrants may not comprehend about true meaning of native conversations even if they can use a local language. that is, the locals and emigrants are disconnected by these problems, there will be rejection about immigrants in the locals' mind.
On the contrary, there are also the exception of these problems around the world. I believed that people can interact with foreigners, although they can not comprehend other's language. For example, there are a lot of people who know english words when they encounter foreigners. Moreover, if they can not know english words, they use body-language to communicate with foreigners such as sounds, acts and expressions.
To sum up, it is significant for immigrants to communicate with the locals. although many people can interact not to use local language, speaking a foreign language can be of great help to avoid various problems when they should live in an abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, well, for example, such as, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12592592593 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79828479702 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52962962963 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.730430765 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248637235998 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832267934163 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649777577984 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169610781578 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751580709711 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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