Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social as well as practical problems.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Submitted by Adah on Wed, 01/22/2020 - 05:19

new Roman","serif"">It is true that living in a country that have different native language can cause some problems, such as social problem and practical problems.

new Roman","serif"">There are several reasons why people have difficulties with new language. language is a way to interact with societies. when someone can not speak clearly, others could not understand with they massage, misinterpret, even not understood at all. so, language is a crucial thin in our life. when someone live in another country that they should be adapt with new language, another problem is lack of confident, because they afraid of being considered wrong, so they hesitate to do something or speak in the public. The practical problem also be disturbed, for instance when someone go to grocery, its hard for them to understand when pay in cashier.

new Roman","serif"">Despite the above arguments, I believe live in another country, make someone learn a new thing. Automatically, day by day they will understand the language used. language skill will increase through conversation or observe surrounding.

new Roman","serif"">In conclusion, although living in different language native country that may cause social problem, but gradually they will get used to the exposure to the environment.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02030456853 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.9383486895 2.80592935109 212% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609137055838 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.2365859009 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.818181818 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142334002583 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655798773831 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482903086452 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108594094216 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550012280881 0.056905535591 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.34 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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