Over recent years, with globalisation the trend of travelling and shifting to abroad has become very popular. The first requirement of it is to learn and speak native language of the region. This obviously results into unwanted issues that this essay tends to discuss.
To begin with, living in a nation of different dialect sometimes results into discrimination. To enumerate, some natives make laugh on foreigners because of their different way of speaking and shows superiority over them. Secondly, it is also difficult for a person to communicate with others as he might not be expert at complexity of other language.
Moreover, majority of people never accept a person of different background and different way of speaking other dialect gives person an unique identity of being foreigner. So, a person may face it hard to intermix with distinct society of other language. Furthermore, such people are not accepted as a part of the community and natives confined themselves behind the walls.
To recapitulate, it is quite evident from the upper mentioned facts that living in a different country of distinct dialect results into various problems such as discrimination and unacceptance.
- In some countries young people do not take care of their elderly relatives Instead they appoint trained professionals who take care of elderly Is it positive or negative trend according to you 75
- The older generation tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extend do you agree or disagre 73
- living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? give reasons for your answer and include any examples from your o 56
- Some say that young people are not suitable for decision making positions in governments others however disagree Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... of speaking other dialect gives person an unique identity of being foreigner. So,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32631578947 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97522549717 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9561902798 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0971199875389 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389482255759 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0184124583858 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605561062159 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177254460352 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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